快来！为你盘点雅思大作文写作高分技巧及注意事项

快来！给她 盘点雅思大作文写作高分技巧及小心事项

　　在雅思写作中，你的一切 的写作技巧事实上如对写作的细节把握。

　　在常常的写作练习中，考生能够帮助 按照雅思写作评分其他标准来衡量别人的写作提高：写作任务安排继续完成其他情况、连贯与衔接、词汇丰富程度、语法多样性及准确性。

　　这不考生们想在可达到雅思写作高分，还地方啦小心如下几点：

　　一：拒绝无谓的单词和词组

　　1.这些不必要的单词或词组其实这不为句子生活带 相学历教育方式有哪几种关联联的或关键性性的其它信息，其实能够帮助 被删掉。

　　这些：Wh学历教育方式有哪几种en all thin学历教育方式有哪几种gs are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

　　几句话中则 则 “when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都凸显出多余。其实能够帮助 去掉。改为：

　　Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

　　2.替换无聊的表达，故意写出复杂的长难句，别人让几乎句子凸显出凸显出冗长，另一并这不给她 自己雅思作文加分。

　　关键性性原因 ：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

　　“due to the fact that”也另一个很典型的繁琐的表达手段的例子，能够帮助 替换，简化为上中的表达手段：

　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。

　　二：拒绝重复词汇和表达

　　1.雅思写作评分其他其他标准则 这些：丰富性。这些考生做大概在写作中用过手段更丰富的词汇和表达，另一与高分失之交臂。常常 这不这不词汇这不重复，但引申引申含义却有重复。这这不能够帮助 做这些简化的其他工作。

　　关键性性原因 上的一个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

　　large对一个farm而对另一size诸多方面的large，别人in size能够帮助 去掉，改为：

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。

　　更简洁的表达手段为：

　　My grandfather grew up on a large farm。

　　2.常常 一个词组能够帮助 用一个更又又简单单词来替换

　　关键性性原因 ：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

　　地方的over and over again就能够帮助 改为repeatedly，凸显出更为简洁：

　　My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm。

　　三：用过手段正确的语法结构

　　选择放学历教育方式有哪几种弃好另一语法结构能够帮助 使句子引申引申含义的表达更为精确和简练。

　　这不语法的多样性凸显出关键性性，但选择放弃好另一的语法结构虽然是更为关键性性的综合考虑因素。

　　如下原则在在综合考虑选择放弃何种语法结构时能够帮助 参考的原则：

　　1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词地方啦能够帮助 反映句子中则 最关键性性的引申引申含义。

　　关键性性原因 ：The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm。

　　从引申引申含义上看分析及，上的几句话能够帮助 表达的关键性性的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，在在表达一个概念时，原句用过手段主语是situation，谓语动词是was，这不强调能够帮助 表达的重点概念，能够帮助 改为上的几句话：

　　My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm。

　　2.以免频繁用过手段“there be”结构

　　关键性性原因 上中的句子：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather。

　　能够帮助 改为：

　　My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day。

　　更简洁的句式为：

　　My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily。

　　3.把从句改为短语或单词。

　　关键性性原因 ：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote。

　　简介的表达手段为：

　　The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university。

　　4.仅在能够帮助 强调宾语而这不主语的这不，才用过手段被动语态。

　　关键性性原因 ：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family。

　　本句不够简洁的关键性性原因是本句的重心地方啦是“忙碌的家庭里-my grandfather's family”，而用过手段了被动语态後，彷佛重心沦为了cows和hay。上中的表达手段是被动语态，相对会 而对更简洁这些：

　　In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay。

　　5.用更为精确另一个动词来代替动词短语，

　　关键性性原因 ：My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends。

　　Stand around doing nothing另一能够帮助 用一个动词来表达，即loiter：

　　My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends。

　　6.常常 几句话的其它信息经一组合其实能够帮助 用几句话来简练地表达

　　关键性性原因 ：Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree。

　　几句话的其它信息能够帮助 合并为上的几句更为简洁的句子：

　　Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree。